I've put together a little sample packet in PDF form, representing the most current revisions of chapters one, two, and three. It also has the nice new map, and an updated graphic for the title.

Here is a small version of the PDF, with lower-resolution graphics.

Here is a high-res large PDF, where you can see the map in full glory.

This is the kind of thing I'm happy to distribute, and I encourage all of you reading this to share. It's copyrighted work, but I'm issuing these three chapters under a creative commons license. This means you're free to share it around, print it up, etc. I'm a full believer in the try-before-you-buy philosophy.

Those of you who've read "revision one" of these chapters will find some interesting new material that hooks into later chapters in the novel.